FEEDBACK: The Never-Wonder Wood
Here's where I swallow my pride and ask for feedback on my own script. It's a little more "sophisticated" than the other things I've been working on, a bit of "historical fiction" I guess it would be called. It's a 15-page story tentatively called "The Never-Wonder Wood", inspired by a real-life meeting of Alice in Wonderland and Peter Pan (or rather, the real people they were named after) as adults, with the real Christopher Robin thrown in for good measure. Lots of talking heads in period dress.